Very nice my friend, apropos to the occasion (including the photo).Though I hope you'll forgive a little technical editing (feel free to dispense with this comment if you adopt the changes).Together--------I shall be as youand you shall be as me...Forever solitaryin this beingjoined solelyby distance.My own existence is nothingsave the heartof a soul's dreamthat beats so aloneas to only have dreamt you.
Obsidian Eagle: Thanks so much for the kind words. Your version works very well so I left the comment intact. Let me know if that's cool with you...
Yes, yes - two versions are better than one!;)
Very nice my friend, apropos to the occasion (including the photo).
ReplyDeleteThough I hope you'll forgive a little technical editing (feel free to dispense with this comment if you adopt the changes).
Together
--------
I shall be as you
and you shall be as me...
Forever solitary
in this being
joined solely
by distance.
My own existence is nothing
save the heart
of a soul's dream
that beats so alone
as to only have dreamt you.
Obsidian Eagle: Thanks so much for the kind words. Your version works very well so I left the comment intact. Let me know if that's cool with you...
ReplyDeleteYes, yes - two versions are better than one!
ReplyDelete;)