Sunday, February 14, 2010

Together

I shall be as you,
and you as me...


Forever solitary
in this being.
Common only
in our distance.


My existance is nothing,
save the heart
of a soul's dream.
It beats so alone
as to have dreamed of you.



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3 comments:

  1. Very nice my friend, apropos to the occasion (including the photo).

    Though I hope you'll forgive a little technical editing (feel free to dispense with this comment if you adopt the changes).

    Together
    --------

    I shall be as you
    and you shall be as me...


    Forever solitary
    in this being
    joined solely
    by distance.


    My own existence is nothing
    save the heart
    of a soul's dream
    that beats so alone
    as to only have dreamt you.

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  2. Obsidian Eagle: Thanks so much for the kind words. Your version works very well so I left the comment intact. Let me know if that's cool with you...

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  3. Yes, yes - two versions are better than one!

    ;)

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